In the beginning, small Peggy lived in a peaceful street.  She hopped out of the brown chicken coop and she played on the black and blue trampoline.  She quietly watched the pigeons fly while they zoomed past the big brown fence into the bright blue, sunny sky.  They went zooming high in the sky. Soon you could not see them.  In the middle, black Peggy got scooped up quickly in a mighty gust of strong wind.  She went over buildings and she landed with a quiet soft crack in a rushing fast crowd.  She went for a walk.  In the rushing crowd she saw things that were so pretty it broke her heart...

Amazing writing to end the year!